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Language improvements

[SVN r30139]
Dave Abrahams 21 tahun lalu
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      more/discussion_policy.htm

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more/discussion_policy.htm

@@ -136,10 +136,9 @@ leave successive lines from the same quotation with differing numbers
 of leading &quot;<tt>&gt;</tt>&quot; characters. <b>Microsoft
 of leading &quot;<tt>&gt;</tt>&quot; characters. <b>Microsoft
 Outlook</b> and <b>Outlook Express</b>, and some web clients, are
 Outlook</b> and <b>Outlook Express</b>, and some web clients, are
 especially bad about this.  If your client offends in this way, please
 especially bad about this.  If your client offends in this way, please
-take the effort to clean up the mess it makes in quoted text you
-include.  Remember, even if you didn't write the original text,
-it's <i>your</i> posting; its readability determines whether you get
-your point across.
+take the effort to clean up the mess it makes in quoted text.
+Remember, even if you didn't write the original text, it's <i>your</i>
+posting; whether you get your point across depends on its readability.
 <p>
 <p>
 The Microsoft clients also create an unusually verbose header at the
 The Microsoft clients also create an unusually verbose header at the
 beginning of the original message text and leave the cursor at the
 beginning of the original message text and leave the cursor at the

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