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[SVN r30139]
Dave Abrahams hace 21 años
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more/discussion_policy.htm

@@ -136,10 +136,9 @@ leave successive lines from the same quotation with differing numbers
 of leading &quot;<tt>&gt;</tt>&quot; characters. <b>Microsoft
 Outlook</b> and <b>Outlook Express</b>, and some web clients, are
 especially bad about this.  If your client offends in this way, please
-take the effort to clean up the mess it makes in quoted text you
-include.  Remember, even if you didn't write the original text,
-it's <i>your</i> posting; its readability determines whether you get
-your point across.
+take the effort to clean up the mess it makes in quoted text.
+Remember, even if you didn't write the original text, it's <i>your</i>
+posting; whether you get your point across depends on its readability.
 <p>
 The Microsoft clients also create an unusually verbose header at the
 beginning of the original message text and leave the cursor at the

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